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  1. 2 p.

    Separated by Sin

    This is the short draft of my second piece of Creative Writing coursework. The task is: to write about a "forbidden love". I despise writing in third person and found it immensely difficult, but I ...

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    Run Away With Me

    I really feel like running away right now. I just need to break free, get out, escape. The walls are closing in and I'm struggling to breathe. Is growing up always this hard?

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    Transparency...

    I can see straight through you, even though you don't realise it. I can read you like a book.

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    Disgusting: A definition

    Note: This is NOT about love. I'm going to let you interpret it for yourselves. And why is it always the people who say they'll never hurt you, that end up hurting you the most? People lie.

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    3AM Anthem

    I loathe insomnia. And writer's block. This was written, surprisingly, at 3am.

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    How to Live...

    Complications, complications...Why can't life just be easy?

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    Savoured Beginnings

    You are perfect...

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    I told you/You told me

    Some people just breeze in and change your life :)

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    Reads: 181

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    Captured in a Letter

    Dear readers, I hope you like this one. I certainly do. Love, me.

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    Shipwrecked

    I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this. Nostalgic, probably. I wish I could look back and read my mind at the time.

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    Reads: 35

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    Winter, In New York.

    I love the ugliness of New York. I just think it's beautiful. I can't wait to go someday. Dream destination right there.

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    10 Ways of Looking at a Daisy

    Something so simple has many meanings...

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    Changes

    Written in about five minutes flat, in the midst of French lesson. It's for a good friend, who was having a really hard time. Relationships are hard. Trying to understand them is harder.

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    A Lost Friendship

    We've all been there... I miss you so much. I'm sorry.

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    Reads: 69

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    Living with Fate

    For my Geography class.

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    Reads: 47

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    Murder in Madagascar

    Written last year for an English assignment. The original task was a horror story...not my strongest point in writing. I gave it a try though.

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    Enigma

    My Original Writing coursework for Year 10. The task was "A short story with a surprising twist" or something similar. I gave it a shot. I was quite happy with my grade!

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    La Nuit Temporaire

    = The temporary night.

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    Flow

    The beauty that water holds amazes me. We take it for granted.

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    Reads: 99

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    Simplicity

    This one is really special to me. I love the simple things.

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    Reads: 95

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Vedika

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December 13, 2009

Location:

Berkshire

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I'm Vedika, and I'm currently making that awful transition into becoming an adult. Music keeps my sanity. I'm always cold, and I live my life on ca... (More)

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sarita brown
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
I adore the honesty in this.
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email

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Linglang
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
This one makes me think of lonely cold, cups of tea, I don't know why, just an image you've created! Beautiful work Siobhan.
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Layers Unravelling All Your Layers Pe...

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Linglang

Linglang Replied:

i can relate to that image :)

02 / 13 / 2010
aylime7
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
I am feeling every single word of this right now and it hurts :( absolutely beautiful...thank you.
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I miss you

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I miss you

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itsmevedika Scribbled:
hey Scribders, I need feedback on this so far, it's my English coursework and I need to know what you think! Cheerio :)
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Separated by Sin

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02 / 03 / 2010
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2 p.

Separated by Sin

This is the short draft of my second piece of Creative Writing coursework. The task is: to write about a "forbidden love". I despise writing in thi...

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Reads: 131

Category: Creative Writing, Short Stories

02 / 02 / 2010
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Phantomimic
Phantomimic scribbled:

I like how you portray the feelings of Hanna as the world she has known unravels before her eyes. But the parallels to Anne Frank's story are obvious. I suggest you look for your own unique angle. ...

02 / 05 / 2010
Crow34
Crow34 scribbled:

Very descriptive, I love it!

02 / 05 / 2010
Linglang
Linglang scribbled:

yes I have read the Kite Runner absolutely superb ,if you haven't already read A Thousand splendid suns by the same author ,then check it out it is a remarkable book + now I know you will adore the...

02 / 05 / 2010
Linglang
Linglang scribbled:

fantastic writing ,you are very talented ...if you haven't read the Book Thief ....do ,I am sure it will move and inspire you :)

02 / 04 / 2010
Orwell_1984
Orwell_1984 scribbled:

You are talented I love it!

02 / 04 / 2010
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Linglang
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
I hate the weather right now, it's freezing and reminiscent of the snow and ugh :( Thanks for capturing it so well Ling, haha. Great job.
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Waiting for the Weather

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bradphillips204
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
This is a little unnerving at first, but intensely passionate. I love the last stanza.
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Love, A Lesson Bestowed

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Reads: 131

bradphillips204

bradphillips204 Replied:

Thank you :)

01 / 14 / 2010
itsmevedika

itsmevedika Replied:

Well it's a beautiful poem nevertheless :)

01 / 14 / 2010
bradphillips204

bradphillips204 Replied:

I knew it would be unnerving to some people, but that was all part of the experience :)

01 / 13 / 2010
brandonfan
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
LOLLLLLL. Brilliant.
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Let's Take A Shower, 2009

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Raul Aqua
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
I love this. End of.
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Deep Blues

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Raul Aqua

Raul Aqua Replied:

thank you Vedika

01 / 12 / 2010
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Make Yourself

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Run Away With Me

I really feel like running away right now. I just need to break free, get out, escape. The walls are closing in and I'm struggling to breathe. Is g...

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Reads: 208

Category: Creative Writing, Poetry

01 / 09 / 2010
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charlotte7900
charlotte7900 scribbled:

yes great lyrics. i want to run away too...from reality into a dream world. but sadly, doesnt exist this world...it exists only the cruel reality

02 / 05 / 2010
Lucid Windows
Lucid Windows scribbled:

I really liked this... you've got talent :)

02 / 03 / 2010
enkidukid
enkidukid scribbled:

Loved it - Ah! if only we could ... or do I mean: I could? I don't think one ever loses this feeling - or perhaps shouldn't? Perhaps it's an essential part of creative living?

01 / 27 / 2010
Crow34
Crow34 scribbled:

I have sometimes wanted to run away, very good!

01 / 26 / 2010
Kenosis23
Kenosis23 scribbled:

I've felt like running away often ... but I have haunting fear that "Wherever you go, there you are." Excelent!

01 / 26 / 2010
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
Being a teenager is NOT all it's cracked up to be...
itsmevedika

itsmevedika Replied:

Thanks Raul :) I am trying to grow and develop, honestly. I'm trying to do so many things...but right now, and I don't know if it's just my age or what, but everything seems to be against me. School, my friends, my family. I'm struggling to hold on and it just hurts :( Or it's my hormones. I don't know, but I'm just a mess :(

01 / 09 / 2010
Raul Aqua

Raul Aqua Replied:

As an adult, I'm cracked but try to keep "cracking up", as it were . . . :) Growth and development is WONDERFUL as a practice Vedika. I believe it's more painful to avoid it than to practice it.

01 / 09 / 2010
itsmevedika

itsmevedika Replied:

I try to keep it easy, but everything just seems to keep changing and...ugh. Adult life looks even harder, if I'm honest. I'm sick of growing up.

01 / 09 / 2010
Linglang

Linglang Replied:

being an adult is NOT all it's cracked up to be .....

01 / 09 / 2010
Brian W Porter

Brian W Porter Replied:

Enjoy the now, 'cause it gets worse as time passes.

01 / 09 / 2010
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Raul Aqua
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itsmevedika Scribbled:
Oh yes!
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Sir Dumas

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Raul Aqua

Raul Aqua Replied:

:)

01 / 09 / 2010
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