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LEE&LOW
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norma22a Scribbled:
The tense and flow of this story is rough. I would have a difficult time selecting this book over others due to this. I would suggest replacing the word “is” with “was” as one quick fix. I think it would benefit from the use of a professional book editor. The story concept is interesting and I wish you well with your efforts – Norma J. Alvarez

Only One Year

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LEE&LOW
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Only One Year

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daileyswan
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norma22a Scribbled:
This is very good. Young and old alike will be taken in by this storyline. Very best with the book intro in May 2010 - Numerologicaly, a release in 8 could be a winner for you :-)
relentlessaaron
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norma22a Scribbled:
I very much enjoyed this. Your writing is compelling and I find it to be much in line with the writing styles of some of the very best Spy novels; I hope you don’t mind the analogy; I love a good spy thriller. There is passion in love, hate, fear, confusion and determination in your writing. I was transported well into the story. Thank You for posting - Norma J. Alvarez
relentlessaaron

relentlessaaron Replied:

well, thank you right back Norma. Have a great week.

02 / 10 / 2010
cwdowdy
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norma22a Scribbled:
Again, someone should find you. You are a brilliant talent and perfect for weekly sitcom humor. You’re the new Erma Bombeck. There is a contest you should enter into: http://www.wclibrary.info/erma/index.asp , you’re perfect for it. Norma J. Alvarez
Miguel A Mendaro
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norma22a Scribbled:
Very pretty. I wish I could do art like this. It would make doing my children's picture book's a lot easier :-) Norma J. Alvarez
api_user_11797_aadhar
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norma22a Scribbled:
Thank you for posting these fables for all to re-visit :-) Norma J. Alvarez
norma22a published:

My Blanket

The children’s story, “My Blanket,” was completely inspired by my 6-year-old niece and a blanket I made for her. She has such an emotional attachm...

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Books, Children's Literature

02 / 02 / 2010
hkhurram
hkhurram scribbled:

Very worth reading and meaningful. Can you please accept my subscription offer pending in your Subscribers list to share more thoughts?

02 / 06 / 2010
norma22a published:

Kiplin Kerry's Got A Cold

This is a children's picture book story that is a fun and easy 1st time reader book. The story is about a little one who is miserable due to havin...

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Books, Children's Literature

01 / 28 / 2010
duponthumanite
duponthumanite scribbled:

Liked pages 2, 3 and 4 best. Great rhyming scheme. And I love the cheery rainbow at the end.

01 / 29 / 2010
relentlessaaron
relentlessaaron scribbled:

BRAVO! BRAVO!! BRAVO!!!

01 / 29 / 2010
WRossAyers
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norma22a Scribbled:
I took stats for wrestling, basketball and baseball in high school. I enjoyed your story. Best Regards, Norma J. Alvarez
Ahmed254
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norma22a Scribbled:
So Simply Put! Every middle school teacher should share this with their students. Thanks for posting. Norma J. Alvarez
AMJADKHAN786

AMJADKHAN786 Replied:

Hello i want to know more if U are a Teacher iam a Asst.Prof. in Pharmacy College for undergraduates

02 / 07 / 2010
duponthumanite

duponthumanite Replied:

Hi, Ahmed! Where did Aristotle write about economics?

01 / 29 / 2010
Ahmed254

Ahmed254 Replied:

For depth knowledge n economics you have 2 move on 4 Aristotle...This article iz for beginner. :))

01 / 28 / 2010
Ahmed254
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Philip Katz
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norma22a Scribbled:
5 Stars for you. I felt I was in the story. You developed the environment well, and have the characters and their positions down pat. I really enjoyed reading this and wish you very well with the story. Best Regards, Norma J. Alvarez
Philip Katz

Philip Katz Replied:

Thank you so much Norma.

01 / 28 / 2010
Philip Katz
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cwdowdy
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norma22a Scribbled:
I really should look at my spelling before I post :-)
cwdowdy

cwdowdy Replied:

You write something that nice and you can spell it however you want. Thanks, CD

01 / 28 / 2010