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Evaluate Your Document
You need to evaluate your document to ensure that you are communicating clearly. Always have another person read your document and offer suggestions for clarifying it. In addition, use at least one of the methods described below.
Checklists

You can develop checklists to guide you through a thorough evaluation. At the simplest level, you need to look over the document for:

  • correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation;
  • inclusion of appropriate devices, such as dating, page numbering, and consistency;
  • visual appeal of the document;
  • consistency and effectiveness of layout and typographical devices (also be sure they are not overused); and
  • odd shapes (e.g., hourglass effect) or line breaks that inadvertently separate parts of a name or date in a way that reduces clarity.
Feedback
Another simple way to evaluate your document is to include a box at the bottom of the page that says:
We try to write clearly. If you have a suggestion on how to improve the clarity of this document, please send it to us at...
Outcome or Process Measures

Evaluation of the process used to develop a product is called "process evaluation"; evaluation of the effectiveness of a document is called "outcome evaluation." Either method may be used to evaluate a particular document.

Easy process measures include counting the number of copies distributed, meetings attended, or articles printed. This information will tell you how a program is operating and whether the target audience receives your information.

Extending a step beyond process measures, outcome evaluation provides information about the quality rather than the quantity of response. The measures may be self-reported (e.g., interviews with members of the target audience) or be observed (e.g., changes in clinic visits or disease morbidity). Comparisons between a control group and the target audience are desirable.

Focus Groups
Focus groups are especially helpful in evaluating frequently requested documents (e.g., health information brochures and forms). These groups are composed of individuals who share traits with the planned recipients of your document. Focus group members can give you excellent feedback about your document before it is finalized.
Individual Interviews

A simple but meaningful way to be certain readers will understand your document is to interview some of them. Such "protocol testing" requires one-on-one interviews with representative readers. This testing generally requires interviewing from three to nine people to find out what each sentence means to them.

Before and After Comparison

According to Making Health Communication Programs Work: A Planner's Guide (NCI), true outcome evaluation requires a "before" and "after" version of the document. This type of evaluation is routinely used for health brochures and documents to be distributed to a broad audience. Outcome evaluation usually involves comparing the target audience's awareness, attitudes, and behavior before and after reading the document. These are quantitative measures that allow you to draw conclusions about the program's effect.

The SMOG (Simple Measure of Gobbledygook) Readability Index
Many tools are available to measure the readability of your document. One is the SMOG Readability Index. It is a simple technique that can be used to assess the grade level of a document. First, count the number of words with three or more syllables in a chain of 30 sentences in your draft. Then look up the approximate grade level on the following chart.
SMOG Conversion Table*
Total Polysyllabic Word Count Approximate Grade Level
0-2 4
3-6 5
7-12 6
13-20 7
21-30 8
31-42 9
43-56 10
57-72 11
73-90 12
91-110 13
111-132 14
133-156 15
157-182 16
183-210 17
211-240

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* Developed by Harold C. McGraw, Office of Educational Research, Baltimore County Schools, Towson, Maryland.

You can also evaluate your document by using your computer software to provide some statistics, such as the total number of words:

  • "Tools"/"Wordcount" in MS Word
  • "File/Properties"/"Information" in WordPerfect.

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Last updated: March 28, 2003