Neutrons Sciences Directorate at ORNL

Tips for Writing Good Proposals for HFIR and SNS

  • Contact instrument staff before writing and ask them about opportunities for collaboration. Staff are available to:
    Contact facility staff early. The number of requests and response time increases as the proposal deadline approaches.
    • Provide details about our equipment and capabilities, including availability or subscription.
    • Help confirm the feasibility of your approach.
    • Help estimate and justify the amount of facility time you are requesting.
    • Help address why this specific facility is the best choice to meet your requirements.
    • Provide constructive comments on your statement of research.
  • Include background information on why the proposed experiment is important.
    Science at user facilities is diverse and reviewers cover broad areas. Don’t assume all reviewers will be experts in your specialty.
    • Include a precisely defined objective; don't combine loosely related experiments in a single proposal.
    • Clearly articulate the science case: state the problem and its importance.
    • Place your research plan in the context of what others are doing. Include references to literature where appropriate.
    • Describe what is particularly innovative about your strategy to address the problem. State why the proposal is timely.
  • Address how the experiment will make a difference. Focus on how this particular effort will contribute to the field. Describe the proposed work including samples, methods, and procedures.
    • State clearly and exactly what you are going to synthesize, measure, or calculate.
    • Describe how your sample(s) have been characterized by other methods to ensure phase purity, crystal quality, or specific intrinsic behavior.
    • Ensure that your facility publication record is current
    • Provide sufficient detail to demonstrate that you have thought carefully about your plan.
    • Describe the techniques to be used to generate and analyze the data.
    • Demonstrate familiarity with prior work done in this area.
      • Refer to current literature, especially your own work
      • Summarize the key points of cited references and explain how your proposed work fits in.
    • Show you made good use of prior facility time
    • Demonstrate your team’s productivity at the facility, if applicable, by describing how the results of previous experiments were used and published.
      • Describe related results (published and unpublished) from work done by your group.
      • Include key data in graphic format.
    • Explain why you need this particular user facility and instrument.
    • Justify the amount of time requested.
    • Identify potential show stoppers and how you plan to avoid them; if you don’t identify them, the reviewers will!
Be clear and specific - not vague or general