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E_Gerald_Oberman Scribbled:
Thanks guys, I've been trying to work on using more solid imagery instead of the abstract. Going from poetry to prose is taking a bit getting used to.
E_Gerald_Oberman Scribbled:
Yeah I know. You’re all alone out there too. Amongst so many faces feigning interest.
E_Gerald_Oberman published:

For Whom the Night Divines the Day (I...

For those I lost amongst the storm of life.

E_Gerald_Oberman

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Creative Writing, Short Stories

02 / 16 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman
E_Gerald_Oberman scribbled:

Thanks guys, I've been trying to work on using more solid imagery instead of the abstract. Going from poetry to prose is taking a bit getting used to.

5 days ago
enkidukid
enkidukid scribbled:

Full of some lovely phrases - too many to mention but I did like "calloused hearts and soft fingers" - the poignancy of the minutiae of everyday things - Oh! it's so sad that final caring sigh ...

6 days ago
S C Stackpole
S C Stackpole scribbled:

I like this one dude! A lot of good images in it!

02 / 16 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman
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02 / 16 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman
E_Gerald_Oberman scribbled:

Yeah I know. You’re all alone out there too. Amongst so many faces feigning interest.

02 / 16 / 2010
enkidukid
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E_Gerald_Oberman Scribbled:
This is beautiful for a first version. Can't wait to see how this turns out. I love the allusion to ancient mythologies, I'm a bit of a sucker for that stuff :)

Remembering

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Lucid Windows

Lucid Windows Replied:

I'm with E.G.O. on this one, you know I'm a glutton for mythology! Dynamic stories and dynamic living is what it is all about which is why we've always attempted to give testimony. If nothing else, mythology is the one thing our species generally agrees upon - hell, just look at how well Hollywood is doing! A myth is a story reflecting who we are. It's a non-poets (poetry).

02 / 05 / 2010
enkidukid

enkidukid Replied:

Thanks - I'm a little concerned there might be just too many "bits"!

02 / 03 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman Scribbled:
Thanks all. I wrote this in the middle of the night on my great-grandmother's type-writer (hence the P.S.). I hope he may see the same love and compassion you all saw. He never returns my letters, but maybe one day... :)
E_Gerald_Oberman published:

Letter to My Father

A letter I sent to my father. I have not seen him in over a decade. I'm publishing this online as proof that even the strongest grudges blossom i...

E_Gerald_Oberman

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Creative Writing, Short Stories

02 / 03 / 2010
Agarwalshilpa
Agarwalshilpa scribbled:

A beautiful & touching piece of work... :)

02 / 09 / 2010
helenwinslow
helenwinslow scribbled:

Best of Scribd. Mazel tov, Gerald. "I wouldn't be who I am today if you hadn't done what you did then." He's reading, I bet; now other dads can too.

02 / 08 / 2010
Luddite
Luddite scribbled:

Beautiful, just beautiful, Gerald. Truthful. Pain leading to understanding leading to love which always leads to forgiveness. thank you for posting such excellent, passionate work here so I could r...

02 / 08 / 2010
FallenYellowLeaf
FallenYellowLeaf scribbled:

I'm slowly 'catching up' on the subscribers who have kindly showed unexpectedly. I loved the P.S. end, innocent in your remark that you are a published poet. Family, of thick blood, do not hold the...

02 / 08 / 2010
schauzer
schauzer scribbled:

Thank you for sharing something so personal. To have overcome this loss and see the 'beauty in even the darkest corners" is a gift.

02 / 04 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman Scribbled:
the best poems are not written for someone; rather, they are written because of someone.
E_Gerald_Oberman

E_Gerald_Oberman Replied:

Yes, often the image inspired by the muse becomes more than the muse ever could. We write poetry around ideals that hover slightly out of our grasp. I write for the romance inspired by the being, not for the being which inspired the romance. :)

01 / 27 / 2010
IslamDawah

IslamDawah Replied:

Not forgetting, that someone is always a figment of imagination, a utopian-being not a real life figure.

01 / 27 / 2010
Crow34

Crow34 Replied:

How true!

01 / 27 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman Scribbled:
Thank you all for the nice comments. Just to be clear, this is a fiction story. And no, there are no billboards that say "dirty Jew," not that I'd be surprised if there were. :P Glad you all enjoyed and I take it as a huge compliment that someone might think it was true. :)
E_Gerald_Oberman published:
01 / 27 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman
E_Gerald_Oberman scribbled:

Thank you all for the nice comments. Just to be clear, this is a fiction story. And no, there are no billboards that say "dirty Jew," not that I'd be surprised if there were. :P Glad you all enj...

01 / 27 / 2010
Laura Novak
Laura Novak scribbled:

Sad and wild and trenchant and poignant. And I could visualize the entire thing. Such soft ending. Very well written.

01 / 27 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman published:

Gaea (eclipse)

Gaea (eclipsed) she's all alone out there, a drop of maple blood rolled in sand; expanding skies and consciousness, she awaits. exploding finger ti...

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Creative Writing, Poetry

01 / 21 / 2010
Phantomimic
Phantomimic scribbled:

"A supernova beauty under eclipse", what an image! Beautiful.

01 / 21 / 2010
enkidukid
enkidukid scribbled:

Lovely - I particularly like the connections you make between the small and the vast.

01 / 21 / 2010
CInarah
CInarah scribbled:

(((SMILING))))

01 / 21 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman published:

Breaking Expectations

Taking a trip back to the darker side. Be back soon with some light.

E_Gerald_Oberman

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Creative Writing, Poetry

01 / 20 / 2010
EasyWind
EasyWind scribbled:

this is real cool man. Embrace the dark side

01 / 20 / 2010
E_Gerald_Oberman published:

Florida Pines and Chapstick

Oh Florida...

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Creative Writing, Poetry

01 / 11 / 2010
RoseDQ2878
RoseDQ2878 scribbled:

Definitely weird. I like it lots!

01 / 16 / 2010
brandonfan
brandonfan scribbled:

Oh your talent to analogize! It almost feels humid here in snowy Michigan right now! Excellent!

01 / 11 / 2010