Held in the Arms of My Sleeping Warrior

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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A true fairytale of love........

Forever in Disquise scribbled:

Truely profound, the best i have heard in a while.
about 4 hours ago
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enkidukid scribbled:

Really lovely! Particularly like the third stanza and the "one beat at a time" line at the end.
about 5 hours ago
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Dino Meurs scribbled:

Nice!
about 8 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

I love seeing you here, Dino! Thanks so much!
about 6 hours ago

Adventure Gal MiMi scribbled:

Take a look at this amazing compilation of verse, it is beautiful inside and out!
about 9 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

Oh, that looks egotistical, not my poem, the link!
about 9 hours ago

Chetsun scribbled:

Readers may view the poem as ‘enlivening’ or ‘enslaving’. Others may find themselves enmeshed in a piece of magical words.
about 9 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

"enmeshed" Love that word! Thank you Chetsun, I appreciate you and am honored you take time to read and comment!
about 9 hours ago

poertychic scribbled:

I love this, its perfection!
about 10 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

Aw, thank you!
about 9 hours ago

Orwell_1984 scribbled:

We allways had faith in you dear.... And this is great!
about 10 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

I never consider myself a poet, I don't plan on writing, things just spew out on paper! I love your work.
about 9 hours ago
Orwell_1984

Orwell_1984 replied:

I write poems, yours are so much more! You allways share your soul!
about 10 hours ago

Chetsun scribbled:

For Adventure it is a 'habit', for me it will a misadventure to keep the 'blinders’ on. Am I to say it is ‘enlivening’ or ‘enslaving’ or both?
about 10 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

Maybe the position of surrendering to love, even though most of us have lived long and hard enough to validate that love in this romantic sense is silly and not lasting. I'm old enough and have lived hard enough to make a full circle, BACK TO believing and enjoying it!
about 9 hours ago
Fitzgerald

Fitzgerald replied:

What am I missing. What position?
about 10 hours ago
Chetsun

Chetsun replied:

When going through the poem, readers find the poem either 'enlivening' or 'enslaving'. Some may find enmeshed by both.
about 10 hours ago
Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

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about 10 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi scribbled:

I just woke up and I am AMAZED! The words came from my heart and I cant tell you all how humbled I am. And I'm FEATURED? Now, I'm crying : ) Thank you All, my love to each and every one!
about 11 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

Wow, thanks paanii7!
about 9 hours ago
paanii7

paanii7 replied:

u are a natural born poet!you deserve it if u're being featured.Bravo!!!!
about 10 hours ago
Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

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about 10 hours ago
Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

Take this trip to a wonderful poet, you wont be disappointed!
about 10 hours ago

paanii7 scribbled:

wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!
about 11 hours ago
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Adventure Gal MiMi

Adventure Gal MiMi replied:

Makes me feel great! Thank you!
about 6 hours ago

ezethu scribbled:

NCAAAA..SWEET EY :)
about 12 hours ago
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shaaibhyaa scribbled:

nice...:)
about 12 hours ago
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1234plmnbv scribbled:

gr8 words=) Very interesting
about 13 hours ago
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amitt08 scribbled:

g8 feeling
about 14 hours ago
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