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chicagotribune
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thomaswingfield Scribbled:
haha, love it!

Obama Cutout

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AlasdhairM

AlasdhairM Replied:

=D

02 / 10 / 2010
thomaswingfield published:

Unaddressed Letters From Soldier #----

"go to a museum and find a person and write about them" ugh... chore... anyway, this is what I did, I might make some amendments soon

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Creative Writing, Short Stories

02 / 06 / 2010
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02 / 06 / 2010
hope.keeper
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hope.keeper
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thomaswingfield Scribbled:
bloody hell!
thomaswingfield Scribbled:
I FOUND GOD TODAY............ turns out he was down the back of the sofa.......
Luddite

Luddite Replied:

Probably been there for years, just patiently waiting to be discovered.

02 / 06 / 2010
thomaswingfield Scribbled:
thank you very much everybody, glad i'm not the only one who sees them :)
Linglang

Linglang Replied:

Hey Tom ,a line from Homer Simpson on an episode I was watching last night "what no Bee's,who'll sting me and walk all over my sandwiches" lol :)

02 / 06 / 2010
thomaswingfield Scribbled:
incredibly tired and inexplicably creative... a strange sensation
-Lunna-

-Lunna- Replied:

im tired but darn i wish i could be creative right now ..... to finish already!!

02 / 05 / 2010
thomaswingfield Scribbled:
"treat people the way you'd like to be treated" - the only thing i conciously remember from school, when i was about 7... And I've realised it's still my rule of thumb today...
thomaswingfield

thomaswingfield Replied:

yeah, well, I've gotta take myself seriously once in a while, otherwise I'll forget how! tbh, I was just getting a little upset at some of the people on here.... *sigh* humans are kinda funny lookin....

02 / 05 / 2010
Linglang

Linglang Replied:

oops now Keno is being wise ....so am I the only fool around here ....i truly hope not :)

02 / 05 / 2010
Linglang

Linglang Replied:

Tom ,you are being far too wise ,whilst Keno and I act the fool ,thank the heavens for balance :)

02 / 05 / 2010
Kenosis23

Kenosis23 Replied:

I think that the perfection of the world is a goal and not a destination.

02 / 05 / 2010
thomaswingfield

thomaswingfield Replied:

if that's true then the world is how it could only ever be... and whilst I believe it's closer to perfect than we like to admit, it certainly needs to settle!

02 / 05 / 2010
Linglang
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thomaswingfield Scribbled:
very crisp, very vivid phonology, i would comment just on a small issue - "above your head you've held a ceiling" kinda goes against "suspended", just takes away from the imagery a bit for me, but doesn't change that it's an awesome poem :-

Letting Go

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Linglang

Linglang Replied:

thanks Tom ,you are correct,but not in essence those were the exact words that spilled from the perosn I was writing about ,so you see they can never be wrong ,besides held and suspended are partly the same ,I was trying to capture the tension of tears held waiting to fall ,almost but not quite stuck ...if that makes sense ...I appreciate your comments :)

02 / 05 / 2010
Lucid Windows
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Lucid Windows
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thomaswingfield Scribbled:
very good, very clever! (though lacked a certain stab that would push it to five stars, sorry!)
thomaswingfield Scribbled:
hmmm... rounded off a few of the edges... need to make sure I don't over-do it... taken out a few tautologies, a few wasted words, a few weak lines... not sure if I'm happy with "but if he did ever wake up", but it's the best option in terms of clarity...
Kenosis23

Kenosis23 Replied:

I am conflicted about aiming for more an more brevity; at times I think that I am aiming at a one-word story, to wit, "Nil." Even Tautologies can have a certain beauty ... Mathematics.

02 / 04 / 2010