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You and I

You and I Myself, an immeasurable vortex of devotion. And you, my need that has promised calamity from the start. Us together, resonates like the m...

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Creative Writing, Poetry

02 / 16 / 2010
Spiritual Warbler
Spiritual Warbler scribbled:

Beautiful!!!

about 2 hours ago
_StarStruck
_StarStruck scribbled:

Flows beautifully throughout! Loved it.

5 days ago
Chetsun
Chetsun scribbled:

'To read or not to read'? 'Which one to read and which one not'? Better late than never. I wonder what qualifications I have to comment upon something that is simply simple, but beautiful beyond co...

5 days ago
Phantomimic
Phantomimic scribbled:

You express well the consuming feeling we experience when we love another, the desire for the loss of the self, for the two to become the one, beautiful!

6 days ago
S C Stackpole
S C Stackpole scribbled:

Very nice :)

02 / 16 / 2010
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brandonfan Scribbled:
This poem really takes me back to those good old days of traveling. The imagery is amazing! :)
Lucid Windows

Lucid Windows Replied:

thanks!

02 / 16 / 2010
Lucid Windows
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brandonfan Scribbled:
Still looking away, even when you know that that was the very mistake that has brought you to these feelings, wonderful!
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brandonfan Scribbled:
Wow! I'm stunned after this one, it is BEAUTIFUL David! There are no words worthy enough to compliment this poem as it should be.
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Lucid Windows Replied:

aw, thanks a 10,001 x's!

3 days ago
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jabo333
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brandonfan Scribbled:
Yes Justin! A great pep talk. Loved it!

I Will Not Hide

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jabo333

jabo333 Replied:

Thanx!

6 days ago
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I Will Not Hide

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Linglang
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brandonfan Scribbled:
Ohhh Ling Lang! This is awesome! I can relate to this, being someone's strength is a hard thing to do, but is very rewarding.
Linglang

Linglang Replied:

thanks April :)

3 days ago
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brandonfan Scribbled:
Oh yes Nirvana, there have been many times that I have been jealous of my own shadow. It doesn't have to feel, it just follows with no question, awesome poem.
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S C Stackpole
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brandonfan Scribbled:
This is just in one word "incredible" Scott. I loved it!

Breaking Down

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S C Stackpole

S C Stackpole Replied:

Thanks, glad you liked it!

4 days ago
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Breaking Down

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