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disciple2000 Scribbled:
funny:)
lizzievale Replied:
Thanks for reading about Evie. I'm always striving to get people to laugh.
helenwinslow Scribbled:
Hey this is that totally funny chick who wote the book about the tomatoes isn't it? I'm with Kathleen and 2++ on this one! And if they really sell SPF 100 sunblock in Io-way I'd LOVE to do a deal with you
lizzievale Replied:
Yes, yes. I'm the tomato chick. I've been told I'm the bat chick, too. lol. Glad you got a chuckle out of Evie.
Taimoor_Ahmmed_1752 Replied:
hi...
kathleenfitz Scribbled:
Thank God -- finally a vampire book I'd like to read. ("Twilight" reminds me of a Disney princess story that encourages girls to be helpless & emo.:)
Two Plus Plus Productions LLC Replied:
The title alone is worth the read. Kudos!
lizzievale Replied:
Thanks kathleenfitz - I've read Twilight, too and I agree with you. Though Evie is hardly a glowing role model :).
This document has been featured!
joeminor Scribbled:
I just came across this and took a quick peek; now I can't wait to read it!!! Love the chapter titles!!!
lizzievale Replied:
Hope you get a few laughs out of it.
kat9o21075 Scribbled:
you have some really great ideas..i loved it!
kat9o21075 Replied:
i meant the book by the way
lizzievale Replied:
I'm glad. I had a riot making things up.
lisadhatch Scribbled:
Thank you for posting this, I like it!
lizzievale Replied:
Thanks. I enjoy making people laugh.
farhad001 Scribbled:
hmmmmm
midnight_crush Scribbled:
this is amazing, i don't care what anybody else says, i read this over and over.
lizzievale Replied:
Thanks. I hope it made you laugh. And, oh, illegal drugs are bad.
jklosty Scribbled:
I love this, Cant wait to see where it goes.
lizzievale Replied:
Thanks. I enjoy writing it.
johnpalisano Scribbled:
This is really fun, Lizzie!
lizzievale Replied:
Thanks johnpalisano! If I can make people laugh out loud then I have done my job.
lizzievale Scribbled:
Next two chapters I'm working on are called "Unemployed, Underappreciated, Underestimated, and Undead" and "Is that an oxygen tank or are you just happy to see me?"
June A Replied:
Quite funny and laugh out loud in places. Watch the farce, especially in action scenes.
lizzievale Replied:
I'll definitely go back and spend a little more time on character development and better dialog so it's not so overly ridiculous and over the top. Keep the critique coming. Thanks June A!
lizzievale Scribbled:
Ha ha! I just realized my very first statement in my novel has a grammatical error. Wrong use of was / were. *face smack*
Brian W Porter Scribbled:
Humorous. I like it. Watch your tenses.
lizzievale Replied:
Thanks Brian!!! I need the feedback badly. If anything glaringly sticks out, let me know which page. I know I overuse the passive voice and mix up past continuous. Been working on this everyday for 3 weeks straight so a fresh POV is greatly welcome.