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[HealthLiteracy 2004] Re: Wednesday Question: Writing how wetalk:better or wors
Joan Medlen
joan at ipns.comFri May 16 09:53:48 EDT 2008
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At 11:56 AM 5/15/2008, you wrote:
>Instead of " Your dominant hand is the one with which you write" or "
>Your dominant hand is the one you write with" we
>can say "You write with your dominant hand."
This is when it's helpful to walk away from "health literacy" and "plain
language," and back into some basic, classic guides for good writing. In
the book, "Elements of Style," Strunk and White would call this "vigorous"
writing. Vigorous writing calls for using fewer words to say the same
thing. The example above is a wonderful example of that.
I find the most effective writing uses direct sentences. Too much writing,
especially in the medical field, begins with a clause. "If you are
taking......then....." or "if you see..... then...." etc.
Take care,
Joan
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Joan E Guthrie Medlen, R.D., L.D.
Global Clinical Advisor, Health Literacy & Communications
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