Animating Poetry: Reading Poems about the Natural World

"For I will consider my Cat Jeoffrey…he is an excellent clamberer"

—Christopher Smart

Introduction

The poems listed below (under Preparing to Teach This Lesson) are all about animals, birds, insects, or the natural world more generally. A few belong to common middle school canons; many may especially appeal to a middle school audience because of the poet's (or persona's) unabashed love of animals and the natural world. Finally, this selection is meant to offer a group of poems especially vivid in its imagery and its use of sound device.

Guiding Questions

• What are some ways to make a poem come alive-to animate it?
• How do literary devices-those aspects of the poem that help the reader see and hear, so to speak-affect poetry?

Learning Objectives

• Consider the use of imagery in poetry
• Consider the use of sound device in poetry
• Translate poetry into another art
• Read and appreciate a diverse selection of poems
• Express their appreciation for poetry creatively
• Create examples of the literary devices considered here

Background Information for the Teacher

From the Academy of American Poets:

• "A Blessing," James Wright
• "Nelson, My Dog," Gary Soto
• "The Eagle," Lord Alfred Tennyson
• From "Jubilate Agno," Fragment B, lines 695 - 768, Christopher Smart
• "Two Butterflies went out at Noon," Emily Dickinson
• "A Nest Full of Stars," James Berry
• "Thing," Rae Armantrout

• "The Blue Bowl," Jane Kenyon
• "Biscuit," Jane Kenyon
• "The Summer Day," Mary Oliver
• "Sister Cat," Frances Mayes
• "Cat Scat," Eamon Greenan
• "The Poetry of Bad Weather," Debora Greger
• "To Help the Monkey Cross the River," Thomas Lux
• "The Moon," Robert Bly
• "This Moment," Eavan Boland
• "End of April," Phillis Levin

Preparing to Teach this Lesson

• Review the lesson plan and the websites used throughout. Locate and bookmark suggested materials and websites. Download and print out documents you will use and duplicate copies as necessary for student viewing.
• From the EDSITEment website, review these terms in the Literary Glossary: imagery (students should recognize that all imagery refers to the senses), metaphor, simile, and personification to discuss literary device as a kind of magnifying glass; and alliteration, euphony, cacophony, enjambment, onomatopoeia, and repetition to discuss device as amplifier. (Definitions of euphony and cacophony are ubiquitous.) You might also consult the related EDSITEment lesson plans listed at the end of this project.

Suggested Activities

Activity 1. First Readings

Activity 2. Visualize

Activity 3. Appreciate

Activity 4. Literary Device: Imagery

Activity 5. Literary Device: Sound

Activity 6. Final Readings

Activity 1. First Readings

Read some or all of the poems aloud. As a class, come to some agreement on what each poem is generally about: list a few primary and secondary subjects, a few of the key emotions involved, any very overt statements the poems make. If you want your students to engage in some small-group work, choose a poem or two for them to do in pairs or small groups after the class as a whole has done a few together. Students can use Worksheet 1 (reproduce as necessary) to help them keep track.

If, for example, you and your students choose James Wright's "A Blessing," with Worksheet 1 in front of them, the class might concur that the poem is generally about the persona's very intense, blessed experience of an encounter with some horses in a field. Primary subjects would include the horses, the speaker, perhaps his friend, and the place where it all transpires. Secondary subjects would include friendship, love, these humans' interaction with nature, and the revelation of the poem's last three lines. Especially notable emotions and attitudes would include those feelings of love and friendship, the gladness, happiness, shyness, and loneliness all referred to in the poem. The title is perhaps this poem's most overt statement, and unraveling what the blessing is should be the ultimate task.

Activity 2. Visualize

To foreground both how much poetry often relies on the visual imagery it evokes and on how active and creative the act of reading poetry can be, ask students to re-imagine one or two of these poems as series of visuals. Encourage them to be as imaginative as possible. They should not feel as if they have to represent the whole poem, nor should they feel that their work is supposed to explain the poem or illustrate the poem's narrative in any way. The goal is to respond somewhat viscerally to the poem's essence, rather than to its meaning. Students could focus on just a couple of images that they find most compelling or interesting, or they could try to represent through their artwork a more general assessment of the poem's tone or attitude.

Students can be abstract in their presentations, offering a canvas of all the colors mentioned in "A Blessing," for example. If students are working with a couple of images, you might suggest that they use their imagination to alternate between long shots and close-ups. They should also feel free to broaden the frame, so to speak, to what they imagine lies beyond the image (the highway just exited, in "A Blessing"), or to narrow the frame to a detail within the image (the lines of horse hair in the mane "wild on her forehead," also in "A Blessing"). All of this activity can be done through nearly any fine art—painting, drawing, collage-making—or through prose writing, perhaps of a very casual nature. Let the students choose.

Activity 3. Appreciate

If possible, display the students' work in the classroom, and give them some time to walk around and observe. Then discuss what students have produced. Can students explain why they focused on any particular image? Do they think the imagery on which they focused affects the poem as a whole more than other imagery in the poem? Did fleshing out the imagery—or adding color, shape, an impressionistic representation—contribute to their understanding or appreciation of why the poet includes that imagery? Did the students' own creative work make them better understand the poem as a whole?

Activity 4. Literary Device: Imagery

Ideally, in Activity 2, students have been free to stray a bit from the poem's immediate content. At this stage, the goal is to bring them back to the poem's specificity and its particular use of device. The question you are asking is: If literary device is a magnifying glass, what stands out, gets noticed, gets bolder? Students can begin by circling all the devices pertaining to imagery that they can find—all metaphors, similes, personification, as well as any special references to sensory experience. (Students can use Worksheet 2 to keep lists of these moments and to record their reflections.) Then, ask them to consider their lists. What emotions get magnified, what attitudes get expressed through this imagery, what concepts get evoked?

Proceeded by an example of the process with the teacher: With Worksheet 2 and "A Blessing" in front of them, students might list any of the many allusions to the details of the physical space (the willows, barbed wire, pasture, darkness), to the complex and surprising images of twilight bounding or eyes that "darken with kindness," the similes of bowing "shyly as wet swans" and "delicate as the skin over a girl's wrist," and, of course, the final metaphor of breaking "into blossom." They can select those examples they appreciate most, identify the device, and then comment accordingly. Concepts evoked by the many physical images here might include either imprisonment (barbed wire) or freedom (the pasture). Emotions or feelings evoked by the similes mentioned above might include timidity and vulnerability. The tone of the final metaphor might be described as astounded or amazed.

The goal is not necessarily to locate and explicate each and every device, but to meditate on a special and remarkable few.

Activity 5. Literary Device: Sound

Now the question is: If literary device is like an amplifier, what gets louder, what echoes, what hums? Again, led by example from the teacher first, as above, students can then begin by circling all relevant sound devices (alliteration, euphony, cacophony, enjambment, onomatopoeia, and repetition). What tone is evoked? And here, too, ask what emotions get magnified, what attitudes expressed. (Use Worksheet 3 here.)

For "A Blessing," students can be helped to hear the "B" sounds that pepper the poem, especially the alliteration in "body," "break," and "blossom" of the final lines, all of which might suggest an energy-gathering buzz that leads to the final break. The pauses caused by enjambment set up surprising moments like the eyes that "darken with kindness." Students might hear euphony all over the poem. The repetition of "they" in the body of the poem might set up students to hear a division of some kind, or a distance, or even an increasingly attentive appreciation. (Line length is also important to listen to in this poem in particular.)

As in relation to imagery, the goal is not necessarily to locate and explicate each and every device, but to listen for those that stand out.

Activity 6. Final Readings

Close discussion with the big question: What is it these poets love so much or are so moved by in their subjects? How do the poem's images and sounds help the poet or speaker express how he or she feels about the animal or natural world?

Assessment

A less formal assignment could involve students writing a poem of their own about a similar subject in which they try to make use of a few of the devices you have studied together.

Extending the Lesson

Related EDSITEment Lesson Plans

• Preparing for Poetry: A Reader's First Steps
• Analyzing Poetic Devices: Robert Hayden's "Those Winter Sundays," and Theodore Roethke's "My Papa's Waltz"
• The Impact of a Poem's Line Breaks: Enjambment and Gwendolyn Brooks' "We Real Cool"
• "Leap, plashless": Emily Dickinson & Poetic Imagination
• Seeing Sense in Photographs & Poems
• Introducing Metaphors Through Poetry
• Recognizing Similes: Fast as a Whip
• Pictures in Words: Poems of Tennyson and Noyes

Selected EDSITEment Websites

• Academy of American Poets
  [http://www.poets.org]
  • "A Blessing"
    [http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/16944]
  • Nelson, My Dog"
    [http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/19713]
  • "The Eagle"
    [http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/19731]
  • From "Jubilate Agno," Fragment B, lines 695 - 768,
    [http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15798]
  • "Two Butterflies…"
    [http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/19365]
  • "A Nest Full of Stars"
    [http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/16734]
  • "Thing"
    [http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/19495]
  • The Library of Congress' Poetry 180
    [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/]
    • "The Summer Day"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/133.html]
    • "Sister Cat"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/061.html]
    • "The Blue Bowl"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/004.html]
    • "Biscuit"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/055.html]
    • "The Poetry of Bad Weather"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/042.html]
    • "To Help the Monkey Cross the River"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/058.html]
    • "The Moon"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/066.html]
    • "Cat"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/116.html]
    • "This Moment"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/138.html]
    • "End of April"
      [http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/178.html]
• Modern American Poetry
  [http://www.english.uiuc.edu/maps/]
  • On "A Blessing"
    [http://www.english.uiuc.edu/maps/poets/
    s_z/j_wright/blessing.htm]
  • James Wright: Biographical Sketch
    [http://www.english.uiuc.edu/maps/poets/
    s_z/j_wright/bio.htm]
  • On Mary Oliver's poetry
    [http://www.english.uiuc.edu/maps/poets/
    m_r/oliver/about.htm]
  • About Dickinson's Use of the Dash
    [http://www.english.uiuc.edu/maps/poets/
    a_f/dickinson/dash.htm]
• Poetry Foundation
  [http://www.poetryfoundation.org/]
• Representative Poetry Online
  [http://rpo.library.utoronto.ca/display/index.cfm]