Rewriting a Short Rule: Step by Step
by John Strylowski
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Step 3 - Replace passive voice with active voice, add pronouns, simplify language
- In § 7.526(b), one long sentence is split into three shorter sentences
- In § 7.526(c), eliminating lots of excess words makes the sentences shorter and easier to read
§ 7.525 Where can I drive on the beach?
You must follow The
operation of a motor vehicle on oversand routes is subject to
all applicable provisions of this chapter, including part 4 as
well as the specific provisions of this section.
(a)On the beach, you must
a vehicle operatorwilldrive in a corridor extending from a point 10 feet seaward of the spring high tide drift line to the berm crest. Delineator posts mark the landward side of the corridor in critical areas.
(b) You
An operatormay drive below the berm crest only to pass a temporary cut in the beach. You mustbut willregain the crest immediatelyfollowingafter you pass the cut.
(c) On an inland oversand route, you must
a vehicle operator willdrive only in a lane designated by pairs of delineator posts showing the sides of the route.
(d) You must not drive on an oversand route
is closed at any time thatwhen tides, nesting birds or surface configuration prevent vehicle travel within thedesignatedcorridor.
§ 7.526 What must I do when I meet another vehicle on the beach?
(a) If you
When two vehiclesmeet another vehicle on the beach, you must yield ifthe operator of the vehiclewiththe water is on yourontheleftwill yield.
(b) If you
Whentwovehiclesmeet another vehicle on a single-lane oversand route, you mustthe operator of thevehicleinthebestpositiontoyield if you are in the better position to yield. When yielding, you must:
(1)
willpPull out of the track onlysofar enoughas necessaryto letallowthe other vehicletopass safely; and
(2)
and then willmMove back into the established track before you drive onresuming thein your original directionof travel.
§ 7.527 What must I do when I get stuck?
(c) If you When
the process of make a hole while
freeing a stuck vehicle that
has been stuck results in ruts or holes, you mustthe
operator will fill the rut or hole
created by such activity before removing you drive away the vehicle from
the immediate area.
§7.528 What activities are prohibited?
You must not:
(a) Drive
Drivingoff a designated oversand route.
(b)Exceed
Exceedinga speed of 15 miles per hour unless posted otherwise
(c) Park
Parkinga vehiclein an oversand route so as to obstruct traffic.
(d) Ride
Ridingon a fender, tailgate, roof, door or any other location on the outside of a vehicle.
(e) Drive
Drivinga vehicle across a designated swimming beach at any time when it is posted with a sign prohibiting vehicles.
(f) Operate
Operatinga motorcycle on an oversand route.
§7.529 May I launch a boat from a designated open route corridor?
You may launch a boat trailering
and launching by permitted ORVs in from
a designated open route corridor is permitted.
You must have an NPS permit for the vehicle
that you use to haul your boat.
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